alright this is how i see it

dawg-your verse was wack................structure could use alot of work..........your

punches need to be rewored so that they hit harder...........as well as your

personals........your flow was a little choppy just because of your structure but you just need to keep elevating man



LK-.......your verse was okay but i have seen you do better..........your structure was

on point in doing that it made your flow onpoint as well and easy to read and

follow............your punches hit the target and stuck and the wording for them was

good enuf for this battle.......keep elevating i would like to see more of your shit