lol tay took it fo sure..on a completely different level tha craca. craca u got a lot of room for improvement. u shud have used a lot more punches and work on ur flow too. try n even out ur lines so its easier to read. its txt battle so u gotta be aware of wat the reader will think. tay nice drop dawg.
vote = tay.g
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