basically tan g city won
whitecraca
the numbas in ya verse ruined flo
ya structure made it worse
ya linez r well 2 short
u had punches but they were weak
u had no personals
ur rhyme scheme is very basic...u need to rhyme bigger words n add multis
basically elevate..ur new...so u can only get beta

tan g city
ur flow woz gud it woz easy to read
ur punches wernt the best,but they were harder than his n u had more
ur rhyme scheme woz tighter...
basuically jus keep elevatin,n add multis...
also get sum personals...aim ur disses beta
overall u had enough to win ...but up it next time

ma vot tan g city