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Old 05-14-04, 06:09 AM   #9
t-storm
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blackwell...ur structure woz ok
rhymes were ther
u had punches bt they were weak

u need to add personals n multis
make ur shit more complex

lucky-u suck
line sructure woz all over
rhymes were basic
punches were weak
no personals
no metas
horrible
u need 2 elevate everythin n quick-but keep tryin...gud luk

overall-blackwell wasnt great-but compared 2 lucky hes a genius!

ma vote blackwell