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Old 05-14-04, 06:45 AM   #10
t-storm
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IP:

ill break it down................

Papa Doc:
Flow: 4/10-woz all ova
Punches: 5/10-they were there but weak
Personals: 4/10-think 1 woz attempted
structure: 5/10-basic-hard to follow
Multies: 5/10-need more complexity
Wordplay: 6/10-not bad but not complex enough
Overall: 29/60

need 2 elevate...tell u woz a noob....up it kid.

Jpoll:
Flow: 7/10-easy to follow...above average
Punches: 7/10-ok cud b harder
Personals: 6/10-think u had 1-n it woz gud...more needed
structure: 7/10-again nice n easy to follow-effective
Multies: 7/10-sum nice rhymes-cud b more complex
Wordplay: 7/10-pretty much same as multies
Overall: 41/60
he cud cum harder but he knew what he had 2 do to win and he did...with ease on his part

vote = jpoll