this bitch postin at me sayin im fucked-up/
u dnt know me dog,so fuck u, your lucks-up/
coz ma lyrical-wit be devouring ya shit-spit/
my verbal-heat b licking at u like blazin-flames/
destroying ur nervous system so ur punches swing,wit-no-aims/
this cat only 16, ima show his hoe a real man/
n that aint up 4 d-bate,im make this bitch watch, n fukin mas-ur-bate
i`ll have the young hoe ridin on ma dick like a tsu-nami/
makin tidal waves in ya bed when im fukin her virgin pu-nani/
so fuck this bitch reresentin from tha"bank"/
after he sees my spit...h`ell probablly b desperate 4 a yank!!!/
yo tahts' pretty sick for a rrook

this tstorm got some potential..good flow...need more personals...good shit though...i like the wit dog...not people got it in them...and also not many people get so...but keep doin it...

and now for dbate...
hmmm...where to start...well i wasn't feelin your verse...talking about guns...and allthat shit...no punches...no personals...decent flow...but i mean it was kinda over by then...how some jokes or disses against your opponent... i really didn't see any!

v - tstorm

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