breakdown for vango:
flow:it worked better in some spots then others but overall good job 7/10
volcab:not that good pretty basic things here not what i expect from you 5/10
punches:some alright punches good use of the words in them too best line,"See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game
WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY" if you could of done your whole verse like that you could of gotten better score in my eyes 7/10
overall:19/30
breakdown for illtalic:
flow
retty straight forward no complexity to your structure but it worked i cause 6/10
volcab:i'm giving you more then vango cause you atleast weren't rhyming lines with the same words but still could be better 6/10
punches:not much here you lacked alot of lines some alright ones though like,"Cos this fag`s quickly disposed.. like antique`s in garage sales" 6/10
overall:18/30
vote--vango gets my vote