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Old 05-14-04, 12:01 PM   #27
JSmoove
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From: Texas
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T-Storm, you came wit it, but a little on the weak side as far as punches...your flow was nice...I followed you fine, but I couldn't connect on your lines. for instance...you said, "bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" ok... i thought his was your best line. You S-T-R-E-C-H-E-D a little too much in this one. I've seen much better from you. I don't know if you jus didn't care or what....

Mad--- props to you dawg on how you put it down. your structure was a little off, but you punched hard as hell (thats why I give u the win). Your opener was good, it set the pace. your last few bars were weak. You didn't KO T-Storm, just dazed him a bit. That waz enuf to win though. Even a slugger gets tired of swingin' sometime. Good job. I guess now it's the quiet after the storm...


vote: Mad Dog