JPoll stop crying like a bitch, its not his fault you used terrible punches and your structure is so fucking unreadable. Seriously, nobody types verses like that. And there is a reason. And your punches? Terrible, again. The Alice in Chains one is the only decent concept you even had, and you worded it terribly. The rest of your concepts were blah. Very blah. This was really the only good punch of the battle:

"whorred by verbs when i just quit then begin...
...kid could steel my four forced words...
and I'd still fuckin win.../"

v/ accomp

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