ttay g-.........your structure was fucked man..........and since that was fucked it threw off your flow and made it choppy........your had good punches and your metas where good.......keep elevating and work on your structure..........

killa bwoy-.......you need to elevate man......your structure was good but you need to work on your flow..........your punches are weak and you really went on about nothing........to me it was basically alot of filler lines........elevate......pc

v/tay-g.....

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