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Old 05-14-04, 01:45 PM   #10
{D.N.A.}
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From: REPPIN VA HARD
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OaS you didnt really come at him hard you could have had better multiez and not a good verse against LE.(4/10)

LE nice ending, struckture and easy to read, punchez were ok but all verses could use some work. (7/10)
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