Here's what i got to say as far as MC Murder goes...

Opening: weak, you should start off with something strong to get the reader's attention, your opening was very plain and basic

Flow: The only thing you did hear was make everything rhyme but in my opinion the rhyme didnt really flow that well.

Vocab: Basic

Punches: I think thats your biggest problem. You didnt have one punchline in this whole rhyme and if you did it wasnt good enough to recognize as one. Punches are what you need in battles to defeat your opponenet. Get some practice doing this.

Closing: Basic, nothing caught my attention.

Here's my comments on Phisyque:

Opening: Very good punchline opener with the hyperbole.

Flow: Overall flow was good, every was put together well and I liked it.

Vocab: I thought your vocab was good but i didnt understand a couple of your lines. U got a canibus rhyme style in my opinion which works.

Closing: The Orkin Man line was good... i would've expected better but I liked that line with the flow.

Vote: Phisyque

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