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Old 05-14-04, 04:02 PM   #7
JSmoove
New to RB
 
Posts: 87
From: Texas
IP:

This battle iwuz hot. Def one of the hottest i've seen on RB so far! Much props to both of you.

40: you brought the heat brother. nice flow and punches.. good opener and nice casual close....I could tell you were jus freein' there...you were havin' a good time playa...just enjoyin' the moment. Your first 3.5 bars were hot, and they connected with a continual rip and hit. I like that c-section bit bruh!!!!

End: Weak opener...kinda wack. I almost didn't want to read the rest. Honestly, you didn't put much thought into that one dude, did you? Your best 1.5 bars were "You`re lines are laim . . I`ve Seen Less Shit Drop`s , Than in my own tiolet.
He`s new to rapbattles, So I`m ending his career before he can employ a rep.
Looking Like An Idian Ladie, Once i aim the laser to you`re forhead & reck it." Your punches were soft. You can't come to a gunfight with a single-shot rifle!!! Your structure needs a little more work...make it easier to read and comprehend. Elevate. Nuff Said!!

Vote: 40