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Old 05-14-04, 04:30 PM   #13
DA BOY GENIUS
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Killah: Opening was average. You didnt really go at him in the opening. Flow was decent. I thought your vocab was pretty good. As far as the punches, there was one I liked about the Powerlines. The Closing was decent.... The Iraq missile thing could've been better but it did the job.

Flows: Opening was weak. You never give your opponenet props in a battle and then start dissin him. You sound confused. FLOW: NOT THAT GOOD, basic rhyming. VOCAB: used basic vocabulary, if you tried different words maybe your flow would be smoother. Punches: Not a punch in the whole rhyme. Closing: Average, told him to follow the rules.

Vote: Killah

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124224 (Please vote on this battle when you get a chance)
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