Rappin Master: Opening: Average Opening, got to get a strong punch in there at the beginning to set the mode how you gonna come at him Vocab: Normal, nothing special
Flow: really wasnt impressed with your flow at all, sounded like anybody could have wrote this, basic rhyming style Punches: Not a punch in site, Im a punchline rapper so I guess I really have to see something special to give you a compliment, but the oly thing that resembled a punch was the CONCRETE and HARD line. Closing: Average
Snap: Opening: The first line about the birth certificate I didnt even understand. But the steroid line was pretty original. Vocab: Although you had some good punches you could've made it flow better with vocab between your punches. It sounded like you was just going from punch to punch. Flow: Pretty good flow but could've been better.
Punch: Had some nice punchlines in there. I have to give this to Snap due to the better punches.
Vote: SNAP
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