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Old 05-14-04, 04:51 PM   #20
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From: So_ILL
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Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

This is the only line outta both verses that even stood out at all, ANd really I dont know how the hell you come up with 13 lines? just doesnt make sense

Pictureperfect....
your lines were too inconsistent, some long as hell some hella short...not sure whats up with that..made it kinda hard to catch ya flow...

Vote= someone

props to both.. close battle.
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