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Old 05-14-04, 04:57 PM   #4
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Cling rap, rope on ya neck, cut up ya chest, make u have bad flash backs like a Vietnam vet//
I’m here to get paid, so I’ll work u like a slave, get smoked by the blunt , just smell the purple haze// Good flow and wordplay so far ma....

I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//
I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits// Haha last line was funny lmao...

Living with me is hell, cause I speak cliental; I’m making as much hits as R.Kelly before he goes to jail//
U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris// Good ending

I liked this, ya kept a good flow and structure throughtout.....kept it steady......had some good wordplay in dere......

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U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris//

I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits//
LMAO

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I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//


Nice drop, 8/10.....keep up ma.....~1ne~
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