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Old 05-14-04, 05:00 PM   #7
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From: So_ILL
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this is what won the battle-

I’ma throw ya brain in tha ocean, and leave your mind at bay //
You could join The SIMPLE LIFE and still wouldn’t be in your HAY day // (haha get it lol)

I’m in the lead of the race, pumpin’ lead with this pencil //
So I’ll put holes around ya figure, similar to a worn-out stencil //

Ya whole rhyme style is Sloppy, so Joe-Blow just get this straight //
Cuz the only time you cum original is on dicks at first dates

some decent lines, i can see your skillz...

as for Kawtic-
I think you was too rushed, cus your rhymes showd it...the structure was good. punches were aaight...
nice battle tho

Vote= T
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