good drops y'all
Dis....good drop you painted a clear picture of what yo do in the morning, you stayed on subject throughout whole verse, had good flow an structure tight shit, rhymes were a little simple coulda upped the vocab though, an threw afew multies in there, but overall good drop

Nolost..........you started out shaky cuz ya first two lines didn't rhyme man, then you didn't stay on subject throughout the verse, your vocab was good, you had good rhyme scheme once you started rhyming but the fact that your story was kinda unclear, I'd say you lost man
Vote: Discharge

Lost....it was good man, you trying to be me, only difference is it woulda been three gurls not just one...haha

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