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Old 05-14-04, 06:20 PM   #19
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triple n - damn you spit a hot verse....very good wordplay and punches.....awesome meta's and i mean awesome....fasho u are underrated....but....the only thing you need to work on is persnals.....throw in a couple personals in your verses and you will be amazing....but great flow on this too....very good drop.....i give it a 9.4/10.....work on usin dem personals!!!!.....props on the meta's though....

gambino - wow another good drop...you had a few good hot meta's...while a couple were just decent...punches were good....advice is tha same....werkon using personals....u didnt win this on though....triple n had more punches....but i think u woulda contended if ur verse was longer....keep elevatin kid....u got potential....

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