This battle was decent.... heres my breakdown


O - You came with an o.k opening- The flow was tight throughout the whole verse but the punchlines you displayed didn't hit super hard except for one or two. The verse itself I give a 7 out of 10.

Hell On Earth - While its obvious you have the concept down- and you know what your trying to accomplish-I think that your punchlines weren't really thought out and didn't have that kick that sometimes makes me chuckle. This might be because when you rhyme you seem to rhyme with only one syllable when the structure you use might call for two or three. I think if you can improve on this and making your punches hit harder you will be extremely nasty. As your verse stands now I give it a High 5 out of 10. I like the way you rhymes look right now and Ima be lookin for elevation.

This Battle goes to O in my opinion.