vote t-storm
blackwell- you didn't really have punches...
ima leave ya "ripped".. "ditched".. and "torn"... this cat thinks hes a rapper but we'll catch wit his mumma mowin the "lawn"...//

and i couldn't tell whether you made an attempt at a structure or not, looked like u had one bar or somethin and ur opener didnt rhyme and lines were stretched

t- weak verse but it was enough