Adroit: First of all dogg, I hope you know what a "bar" is cuz that wasnt no 10 bars. What I did like was the punch about the brain and the jog of memory. That was pretty creative. But the opening and closing was average. The punch I mentioned earlier was the only hot punch that you had in your rhyme. The vocab and Flow was pretty average as well. Keep Spittin Fam.
Shamira: You had a couple good punches in your flow. You used the word "FUCKIN" to much but its aight. The flow and vocab was pretty basic but you did enough to defeat your opponent. Opening and Closing were average as well.
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