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Old 05-15-04, 01:24 PM   #15
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v nolost4rhymes.. merked this cat yo.. punch lines were much better than wills.. will your shit was weak you had some corny lines in there.. that line about private messages was extremely corny also some of your lines did not even rhyme at all like topicals..lol topicals doesnt rhyme with anything in your verse yet it was at the end of one of your lines.. weak diss overall i felt like you didnt come hard enough on the personals either

nolost4rhymes your verse was ok.. i liked that simpsons line shit was a ok punchline i didnt really see those many hard hitting disses in your verse.. but overall i felt like you came less corny and herbish than will thats why i give the vote to you
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