Toxic?, just another newb. ta devour and add ta my list.../
Bitch couldn't get a head in battle if I gave him tha tip of my dick.../
Call me T-Mac cuz i'll preform magic and leave Toxic black and blue.../
Toxic couldn't pull ya weight in battle takin three bottles of stacker 2.../
This was probly my favorite part from Lyrical Killas verse... It flowed really well and I liked the stacker 2 punchline. I think the whole verse was tight though good job....it gets an 8 out of 10

you're nothing but an extra, i'm a star/ you're about same sex relationships you chill at gay bars
This was Toxics best bar cuz the punchline hit well and you had good wordplay in it....
i'll leave you like the tin man when i rip out your heart/ you got one up on the cowardly lion to go against me you've got courage/ but i'll leave you like goldilocks staring at your porridge/-- Went you went of on this wordplay punchline tangent I thought you were gonna take the battle...but the way it ends I think somethings just not right otherwise this punch would have really snapped and set up for a solid ending... All in all I give Toxics Verse a 7.99- Cuz you would have won this battle if your punches were structured just a little differently.- Vote- Lyrical killa




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