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Old 05-15-04, 05:43 PM   #18
Da Vinci
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This shit is a battle you don't win battles with fancy word play and mettas you need to be throwing punches someone please who me where in Glitches drop did he throw a punch?

ya ya i heard it all before im a newbie,
but this is a lyrical lesson and soon you'll see//
-nice word play where's the punch?

unleashed speach so elite when i speak words
nouns and verbs shit you never heard//
-great, but where's teh punch

takin your bastard writes into the after life with plaster mics
inspite the lime light tonight your shit was tight but this shit is hype//
-great compliment the other guy, where is your punch?

your shits all the same stinks like siamese- bile
got you all in denile, sittin typically chinese style//
- okay maybe the first line here was a punch but a weak one

meanwhile im battlin with robotics with eyes of bionics
i spot it n' audit topics like mosh pits i squash shit//
-all you talk about is you, you, you, nice word play no punches

lift up my heel than kick you in your ass hole
cuz im kinky and bashful, just ask Fidel Castro/
-again "cuz I'm" "lift my heal"

your my raps ho stripped cryin on the floor
on all fours pleading please please no more//
-second line here a bit of a punch not really

you like how that was formed? be forewarned
this aint no sprinkle its full fuckin storm//
-great "this is what it is" where is the punch.

These other people do not know how to vote you should D.Q them all, shit.
Now look at East Miles verse I'm not really even gonna go into it, its just that obvious

After this battle.....I won't be surprised if you pull a Kobe.....N probably opp out...I already know your rymes have a "Glitch".... So don't try to use your grabage name as a copp-out//
-A FUK'N PUNCH, not a great one yet still

Treat you like "Kayne West" and spitt.....make you reminise..... your reflected battle "Dropout"//
-there we go
5-0 win.... everyone knows a newbie dosen't have a chance.... I expect to have a knock out//
-punches, not hard but connecting
These are some of my weakest punches I could ever throw....Put in a row.....to crack your dome.... with every effortless blow.//

Shoot ya shins out... let you pray to the lord....Watch as I cook this cat just like a chinese store.... The rocket long....Like yao Ming..... the chinese Boi//

Your rymes are weak.... you should write with invisible ink..... You broke... I can tell the way you write... It feels like this guy rocking invisible minks//
-/\/\/\ this is a good punch,
You'll get hit with the pipe....that'll remove all of your front teeth.//

You'll probably use the same line....."You're not gangsta"<---(Glitch).... But when reall I actually keep heat....AK under my bed...N Desert Eagle under the Escape front seat.... Face it like a mirrior.... Rookie you beat.....Take a seat.... Because when I win they'll be talking about my verse for....10 to 20's of weeks.//

-The word play was not as good as glitches the metta's weren't either but Glitch didn't even battle he just rapped the whole time, wake up people learn how to vote.
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