D - your verse was aight. you had pretty good personals...but your punches were average. I know you could probably do better.
MC - You gotta get the automatic "L" just for bittin' off someone. The link is below. "You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire~Your Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot" that line is kinda played. It's just used in different ways. You gotta be original. You also gotta get some more personals in there. Be original dogg.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121816
My vote goes to D