Mike12Ikeda: ok.......well the verse wasn't that bad you needed to
throw more punches in the rhymes cuz battles to me revolve mostly
on punches.......multis aren't important. your flow was good only one line stretched. the vocab was a bit basic...it was creative in a way by mentioning celebs & dat kind of shit... the effectiveness wasn't that good I would say only this line was effective:
"If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables"
G
euce well the verse was a lil above Mike12Ikeda's....punches way more
than Mike12Ikeda and as I said b4 battles revolve around punches.... flow
was good..... vocab well you said bigger words than him but vocab ain't that
important either.... creativity well you mentioned shows not many people
do that & effectiveness was half decent most effective line in my opinion
would be:
"I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find"
Punches: G
euce
Flow: tie
Creativity: tie
Vocab: G
euce
Effectiveness: G
euce
honest vote......
goes to: G
euce
word of wisdom: up the punches a lot more & make it more
effective like more personals...........