Heavy Lies The Crown
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^lmfao
mike your opener was nice good wordplay and creative but punch didnt hit that hard though your closer wasnt to good to me either last long was stretched not very creative either not much of anything in it i liked and the rest of your verse was inconsistent it started off tight an fell off bad to me in the middle an never really picked back up first 8 lines where nice the rest where weak to me just work on stayin consitent and not stretchin out ya bars cause it kills the punch most of the time
deuce your opener ummmm tumors make your brain swell so that didnt really make no since to me so not much there but good wordplay an your closer .... decent i guess didt really see much i liked in that either and the rest of your verse had good wordplay and all some good punchs and some not really connected i was fealin less then half of your verse only liked about 6 lines the rest where off to me
Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".
Mike reminds me of “Cosby”, he spits “pudding”, his words are just not “hard” hittin
My lines melt out his eye sockets and have him seeing nothing but “jello” vision
I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find
^ all sick but not enough
vote mike
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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote
some people that are mods on here
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