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Mike12IKEDA:good verse,solid structure,um good flow,tight
best line:You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….
pretty good,good wordplay.structure,good solid flow
worst line:You will never take home a W even though you rap all serious
Get this emcee a tampon cause I made this pussy bleed like he was having-his-period….
loose rhyming,but good
work on: add some punches in your verse and youll be sicker
overall: 7/10

GDEUCE:good verse,but some lines made me shake my head,but pretty average flow,your structure wasnt the very best either.
best line:I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find
not very good,but the best in there
worst line:teach you how to use it
Move down your spind, quick stopping your heart, now that’s acoustic
rough flow,not very good structure
work on:your structure,add some punches,but apart from that fine.
overall:6/10

FINAL VOTE: MIKE12IKEDA

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