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Old 05-15-04, 10:13 PM   #15
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This kid couldn’t drop (w)raps if it was his birthday//dont make sense
I got him more “shook” than Muhammad Ali during an earthquake//meh....
So he made the battle callout and asked me to spit-first//
Coz he knows that like Cheech and Chong sharing, I “split-herbs”//nice nice
You don’t even hope-to-win this faggot aint “dope”, but I’m still “smokin”-him//
This fool couldn’t blow up if he was in a furnace soaked-in-gin//dont make sense
You couldn’t make the crowd “throw up their hands” in you “dropped-the-ceiling”//tite
My “shots”-aren’t-healing ones giving you “nerves” like you lost-all-feeling//* hmmmm
Claim to be a Killah, but you don’t “bare arms”-like-geriatrics-with-tattoos//ok
While you’re in trouble coz I’ve got no qualms-to-bury-faggots-and-wack-crews//
You’re a “desperate dickhead”, so any little bitch could “blow-your-mind”//damn,....
Like you’re the Giants and I’m the Patriots, you’re loss is no-surprise//
I’m “spitting flames”, so it leaves you in crisps, my tongue burnt and my mouth-sore//
My style’s-raw, your “punches” are never “right” like you’re a southpaw//**nice closer
your wordplay was nice and flow was good...but you need more metaphors...but tight verse...add more multies and metaphors....some shit didnt make sense

This is tha first hit ya know I throw ya ass threw a glass window.../
Bitch ass hoe Ya rhymes are trash played out like a Super Nentindo.../nono....
MacKa couldn't beat me even if Re$tricted give you lines for u to diss me.../
I thought you were decient i'm wrong, cause your another whack MC.../meh.....
Bringin death ta ya frame, how bout I jack you up like Debo…/
No wonder ya sex drive is gone you need ta enhance ya dildo…/thats good
MacKa in dis battle you can't win so start givin up hope.../
Stuff crystal meth in your intestines just ta say ya flow is dope.../nice nice nice
I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I could do with some pratice but not against lyrikaly weak pussy's.../
I don't know why u wanna battle me u everlastin rookie.../ok.............nice flwo
Nobody votes for your shit when you spit it give up thats gota be a sign.../
Everybody on here knew I beat you right after they read the first line.../
good battle man but v--macka cause he was more CONSISTENT and he had more ¨wordplays¨, he came wit many styles. however, lyrical killah´s was tight too wit as good punches but some lines were really weak. your flow was better....but agian it is a hard decision....I gotta give it to¨macka for consistency sry no hate.....good battle
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