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Old 05-15-04, 11:51 PM   #17
E Looch
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ok i battled restricted he had personals on me they was weak but he had em but umm

restricted opener was decent had multies punch didnt reall do much to me though and your closer was decent again bout all i gotta say about it and the rest of your verse was lil above average had plenty of mulites but them commas get old my advice is drop the commas but i reall didnt see any personals in that verse punchs where there
but didnt like all them what your punchs are gonna do to you lines overall nice verse though

deleon your opener was not to good wrong place to put somethin about a tournament and the punch didnt really connect and your closer was..... i dont know how to describe it so ima leave that alone and the rest of your verse i didnt really like this spit sounded like you was more focused on dissin some girl he probably aint even got but the multies was there an some good puncsh in the opening lines just didnt feal it from the girl shit down didnt really say much about him after that you got skills though i see u brah

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