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Old 05-15-04, 11:58 PM   #19
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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a got 4 macks a few .9s
ive got plenty of beef
if u wanna talk and it aint diss then let it be brief
cause bitches like u cant handle ure reef
if you wanna battle lets rhyme with some lyrics fromthe streetz
ill kick ure ass to the ground and blow off your fuckin feetz
am the type of nigga who will be spittin and dissin ure sad ass beatz

WASTED NO NEED WORST LINES WAKK!!! 3/10

Break down
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Flow 3/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 2/10
Punches 6/10
18/50

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Y, would you wannna battle me and not make the battle rated.|
NOt even an Escalator Can Make His Rhyme a bit more Elevated.||
You couldnt make my rhymes cold if ya rhymes were a pack of ice.|
Only a Sniper Rifle Can Get Ya Rhymes To Be More *Precise* To Hit My *Rhymes*.||(sound it out)a sniper rifle is presise meaning accurate)
UR,Rhymes Suck More Than The Record Of THe Cincinati Ben-gals.|(

A little off ok 6/10

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
34/50
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