breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:nice job nothing too complex i'd of liked to see more internal rhyming though 7/10
volcab
retty good nothing too amazing though 7/10
punches:some nice lines for the msot part real personal best line i thought,"If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!" nice job 7/10
overall:21/30
breakdown for VC:
flow:wasn't quite working on the same level as shadow your lines were streched out a bit in spots and wasn't really any internal rhyming to help it 6/10
volcab:good job no problems here 7/10
punches:a couple of nice lines the big problem was the amount of them there wasn't alot of concrete lines directed right for shadow best line,"I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/" nice name flip 6/10
overall:19/30
vote--good battle one of the better ones of the week but my vote is for shadow's edge