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Old 05-16-04, 10:13 AM   #12
Sonek
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yo the way this going i think it will be a k.o cause imma have to go with the others on this one shifty structure and flow was better, his use of multi's destroyed everything you had when he incorporated them with the punch line that he did have
shifty best line
my tight writes, and EXTREME-MIGHT, bring SUPREME-FIGHTS, that left you on the left, and youre rhymes on the right/

b rad g best line
So drop another rhyme and line, about how you carry a 9 and love crime
And pay me out that’s fine. But you won win just with dick riding this time

ok and that ine was pretty low key you have to make youre rhymes more complex to give them that much more of an effect if you can make ppl think hit with double meanings then you will take it

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