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Old 05-16-04, 10:20 AM   #14
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Both yall spits was aight. I was feelin one more than the other tho.
Godfather:
Like I said your spit was coll but tha ryhme scheme was basic throughout most of da verse. You had some nice punches in there along wit some wut tha fucks.
Best line:
"My blows leave you swelled up like Rocky,
I thought this sight was for real battlers you must of got tired playin hockey"
Worst line:
"Yo I play you around all day like if you was a toy,
Call me MC hammer cuz you can't touch this even if I was a 7 year old boy"

Graphex:
I liked your verse. You came wit it wit nice punches and wordplay.
Best line:
"This is my mafia i'm hauntin ya wit poppin tongues,
Talkin puns that make you flee quicker than droppin runs"
Worst line:
"The godfather who's he? I get better rounds comin from floozies for a toonie"
(I just didn't understand that line)
Fair to say graphex had the better verse

vote+graphex
swing thru here and peep this yall
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...872#post1290872
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