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Old 05-16-04, 10:43 AM   #14
DA BOY GENIUS
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Graphex: Opening was Average. Your closing was decent. Hey man your flow, multis and vocab was good here. But you need punches to win battles and I didn't see any at all. You had the birdshit line that was aight. But except for that I didn't see any punchlines here, you got to come at your opponenet hard with punches to get votes here. Keep Spittin Fam.

Valor: Its like the same thing I said to Graphex. I didn't see any punches here really at all. Your flow and vocab was decent. Opening and Closing was average. You got to come with more punches against your opponent. I'm giving my vote to Graphex becasue I think he had the better flow overall. The Punchlines wasnt there in either verse so I cant go off of that. Im going by just flow here.

Vote: Graphex

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (PLEASE CLICK ON THIS LINK AND TAKE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I DID THE SAME FOR YA'LL!!!!)
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