kollision:
your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//
^^ good use of multies,nice line, unfortanetly the rest wasnt that good^^^^
U Neva *Cum Right* Like A 'Magical Discharge', So Keep On Your 'Tactics~Of~Wackness'//
Cuz Spittin Gets Ya 'Magical Dick Hard', Me..I Can Beat U While *Holdin Back* Like A 'Chiropractic~Practice'//
^^^^^^ terrible line structure is wack your line was way to strecthed^^^^^^^
thats your worst line
need work on ya structure overall*6*
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restricted why only 6 lines?
your punches hit fairly hard and you had nice structure
but your punches need work
Kollision Is Wishing He Would Diminish In Vision or Hide In Prisin..
Cause Hiding Behind Bars Is The Only Way This Kid Is Fit To Risin..
&^^^^^^^^ good line nice multies and punches
overall*7*
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my vote: restricted

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