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Old 05-16-04, 11:26 AM   #7
DA BOY GENIUS
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Restricted: You had a couple good punches in there. Your opening was average but I like your closing punch with the mints on the knuckles... That shit was clever. Your flow and vocab was there, this was a nice verse for 15 minutes... Keep spitting fam.

Kollision: Your opening was ok. Your closing line was decent but it was to stretched out to give any real meaning and power to the punch. I like your use of multis and your vocab and flow is all there but I think you need to work on the punchline part of your flow because this is what you need to when battles. Keep spitting homie.

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