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Old 05-16-04, 01:14 PM   #18
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From: Home Bean&Brock 617-508
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first let me say i was feelin both participants in this battle

Black:
Your flow was a little hard to follow wit tha way you wrote it and all and some of the words you used but your punches were raw and uncut like pure cocaine. Hot 2 death my nigga.
Hottest line:
"Shove jackets down your throat makin you throw up your hood"
Worst line:
"This boys worthless and your previous battles aren't helping you get sick like toy nurses"
I wasn't really feelin dat but it's cool.
Gkillaz:
I done seen you spit some real sick shit this battle wasn't up there wit those but it was good. Your verse was the exact opposite of your opponents. Flow was tight but you lacked in da punchline field homie.
Hottest line:
"I'm smokin a guy from youngs town he's turnin my lungs brown"
Worst line:
"I'm droppin my shit on you like you was the crapper that can seat to"
I ain't understand dat line doggy.
But like I said it was a good battle.

vote=black magick
swing thru here and peep this
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15
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