Aw this shit was hot on one persons behalf. The other was just ok.
Spoken bluntly:
Your shit was hot shorty. Hot 2 def. Your punches was sick.
Hottest line:
"cummin at chu harder than your father overdosed on viagra
You lovin my sermons call me da pastor
Niccas open your legs easy like a new chapter."
Worst line:
I can't say you had one lil mama.
Adroit:
Your verse wasn't bad it just wasn't enuff to contest wit your opponent. You lacked tha punches but your flow structure was peace.
Hottest line:
"Please forgive me if i have spoken bluntly/
my words are a bat and your back has been broken"
Worst line:
"Oh no everybody spokenbluntly is shakin my frame/
This ain't no game dame that shit was lame and tame"
That shit wasn't cool too many basic simple rhymes in da same line homie.
vote=spokenbluntly
swing thru here and peep
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15