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Old 05-16-04, 02:04 PM   #12
DA BOY GENIUS
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LyricalDemon04: Your opening was good and closing was average. Wordplay and flow was pretty good. What I liked was the punch you had about classic. That shit was real nice. Keep spittin family, you nice.

Vinman: You need work fam. Opening and closing werent that creative. Closing, nets vs pistons line was wack. You need to step up your wordplay and flow. I didn't see any structure as of how you wanted to diss your opponenet. There weren't any punches in your flow and that is what killed you. Need punches to get W's. Keep spitting though fam.

Vote: LyricalDemon04

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124582 (PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON YOURS, GOOD LOOKIN!!!!)
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