ok.......young-Nice spit
aight.....strcture needs more work though
similies was ok so was mets.....Work on a few more
things

vinman......I think ya took this by a tinty becuz
he was close up on ya.....Structure was better
then your....But the similies and metas are alright
Work on balance though and complexity

v/vinman

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