fat4kp: Opening was average. For Closing you should've said something that rhymed with take it to the streets. Taking it to the phone just sound like you a pussy and don't want no beef in real life. Vocab and Flow need some work. I didn't see a punchline in there and its hard to win without punches. Keep spittin though.
LyricalMurderer: Got to give this vote to you because of the better vocab and better punches. Opening and closing were ok. You just had the better flow overall so I'ma give this one to you.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124582 (CLICK ON THIS LINK AND VOTE FOR THE BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK TIME OUT AND VOTED FOR YOURS, GOOD LOOKIN)