demon-few hott stuff but need more work on a few things
also work on similies....But the rest was good...flow
need to be better but ya took this becuz of structure wans flow

vinman-Work on flows a lil more and hard hittin
punches becuz thats what stopped ya.....similies
need work so does metas......

v/demon Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

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