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Old 05-16-04, 02:33 PM   #7
CoMbatReNeGaDe
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Better rhyme less because with more time and rhymes you spit you digress
He must be “going down escalators” the way he’s reversing the elevating process
Best chance you got is dying cuz that’s the only way I’ma be R.I.P. (Ripped)
His good rhymes would never “stick” if his rhymes embodied his avy
On this site his rhymes are red lights, each rhyme packed in a hearse
He‘s trying to make his rhymes more than “just ice“(justice) but he’s getting less “per verse” (perverse)*
Indestructible but like Achilles, one weakness, his mouth is where I aim
He couldn’t “mesmerize” us with his rhymes if he could “spell” his own name**
On him I’ll leave a “scar “ “face” so hell at least be “shooting” for the stars
How he gonna win when he doesn’t know the difference between a line and a bar***
His rhymes would never leave a trail of fire if he was dancing with the devil
If Rhyming was like the ocean then this bitch’s rhymes is below sea level


*red lights stop traffic, perverse= sum1 who turns away frum justice
**spelled his own name wrong in his sig
**he said 6 lines wen it wuz 6 bars