final-Kind of a weak spit.....work on a few thigns
includin similies and the metas.....need work also the balance
the complexoty......structure was ok.....few hard hitin punches
but on a real alot of work needs to be dont

big-Im no no no...not really hard hittin punches work
on everything that I said in final becuz ya really need it
nice spit for both and keep elevatin

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