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Old 05-16-04, 04:13 PM   #8
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nice spit by both...i cant vote...but i am going to leave feedback....

Deleon - good spit...u had better wordplay....punches were good....no personals...sum multis....good flow....just work on using personals....u had a couple good meta's....elevate on those too....like it says ur only a rookie and u got potential....so keep elevatin....give ur verse a 7.3 out of 10....

Deadly - nice spit also....flow was good but shoppy in places....but u had punches and personals in this battle....even in the multi's.....good battle by woth....deadly....i suggest u work on wordplay.....so elevate in that spot....and elevate in the meta's.....but u got this one just because of the personal/punch category....

very even matched battle though....good spits...

Vote - Deadly

I cant poll it though cause me and deadly are in the same crew....but i wanted to leave feedback....

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