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Old 05-16-04, 05:13 PM   #13
PoLiFicK
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aite no match really here dis wuz a 1 sided win

re$tricted-nice drop merked dis cat wit ease

bestline-I'm Ripping Out Your Spinal Cord and Wrapping It Around Ya Neck..
Choking Ya Mic Source, HeavyWieght Punches KO'N This Wannabe Vet..


beat his whole verse

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 9.6/10

it dont get no eassierrrrr

kollison-aight drop juss no match in dis contest

bestline-your structure needs much work, kinda wack, good use of multies though
U The 'Type To Deep Throat' For 'Free Votes' And Stay 'Perminently~Soaked~In~Semen'//
For U Grabbin The 'Mic's A Complete Joke' I 'Eat Flows' And 'Contently~Choke~This~Demon'//

nice start

worsteline-note really none but still lost

overall verse gets a 9/10 nice drop
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