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Old 05-16-04, 05:13 PM   #10
E Looch
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ok break down

ok deleon decent verse had a few good punchs not any personals a couple of nice metas and useful multies just work on using personals alot more an staying consitent with hard punchs an try stayin away from the gay joke punchs

dv good punchs and personals not really much wordplay and your text style is different but i aint feali nthe way the structure is set up but shti dotn realyl matter anyways basically got my vote from havin personals and better punchs work on usin wordplay alot more shit be pretty sick with them punchs

vote dv
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